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he charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

he charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
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The two charts compare the populations of France and
India
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 in terms of
age
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 distribution by gender in the year 1984.
It is clear that
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 the
population
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 of
India
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 was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of
people
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 aged under 20. France,
on the other hand
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, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants. In
India
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, close to 14% of
people
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 were aged 5 or under, and each five-year
age
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 bracket above
this
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 contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the
population
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. France’s
population
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,
by contrast
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, was more evenly distributed across the
age
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 ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all
people
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) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French
people
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 were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for
India
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 was only 2%. Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from
age
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 50 upwards.
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, almost 3% of French 70- to 75-year-olds were women,
while
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 just under 2% were men. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian
population
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 chart.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, age, population, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compare" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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