The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The line chart illustrates information about the proportion of the consumption of fish and various types of meat in European countries from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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, we can see beef experienced a downward trend,
while
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chicken showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both lamb and fish
initially
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had a lower rate it outraced beef
at the end
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of the period.
In contrast
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, chicken's consumption rate was about 150 in 19979 being lower than beef's rate by approximately above 200.
Then
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, it Rose to almost above 200 in 1989.
however
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, the figure shows a gradual decrease to under 250 in 1994 and continued to climb steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 250 in 2004.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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