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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.
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The given table illustrates five indicators of
China
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,
India
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 and the
USA
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 that have the highest crowds.
Overall
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,
China
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 has the most habitant
while
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 the
USA
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 has the least. It is interestingly that,
India
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 as the second most populous country, has the highest congestion.
According to
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 the chart,
firstly
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,
China
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 with 1.415 billion and
India
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 with 1.354 billion have a huge number of people,
in contrast
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, the
USA
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 has 327 billion residents.
Secondly
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,
China
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 and
India
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 despite their large ground space with 9.388 and 9.147 million square kilometres respectively, have a small rise in inhabitants by 0.3% and 0.7% respectively since 2017,
in contrast
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,
India
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 with small soil (2.973 kilometres) has the highest citizen's increase(1.1 per cent). The density means the residents per square kilometre, associated with the land area. Even Though
India
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 Has the highest aggregation of 455 individuals per square
kilometres
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, it has the least townsman (32%). Compared to the
USA
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 83 per cent of citizens live in the city.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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