Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Space research has

spend

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a lot of

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those

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money

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spent can actually be allocated to help condition

on

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the

earth

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in several

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and make the

earth

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worth living

for

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the next

hundreds

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years. Some people worry too much about the future and neglect the current urgent situation which is global warming. Those irresponsible who

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down the

forest

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forests

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for

the

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mining and leave the

field

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fields

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hanging without growing back

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tree

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trees

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are making our beloved

earth

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lacking of

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trees

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to absorb free radicals and carbon dioxide.

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,

this

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results in bad

effect

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effects

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of global warming.

By

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this

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big

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large

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amount of

money

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, the international organization can bring back the

forest

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forests

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in every

country

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and reduce the effect of global warming.

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, the United

Nation

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can allocate billions of dollars for planting big number of

trees

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in each

country

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.

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, the

trees

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will produce more oxygen, absorbing the carbon dioxide that the big plant industry

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. The planet will less warmer and the ice

on

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in

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antartica

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Antarctica

will not start to melt down, reducing flood

number

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arise

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in every

country

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. People

also

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try to leave our planet and

problem

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problems

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behind,

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actually everything still can be fixed. Thousands of dollars can help every state to fix

the

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sanitation

,

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because when

rainy

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the rainy

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season comes, floods and catastrophes happen in every developing

country

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.

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, since

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developing countries don't have adequate sewage disposal and sanitation,

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distributing

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those

cashes

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cash

amounts of cash

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will help

thousand

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a thousand

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lives

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of lives

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from catastrophes and for them to improve their condition

besides

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suffering from

disater

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disaster

.

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, the

money

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can be used to grow back the forest as the

trees

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play

crucial

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role in saving the

earth

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and

allocate

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allocated

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to sewage disposal as it needed to be built

for

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to

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prevent flood

arises

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.