The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts delineate the exporting of
pineapple
global
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by
top
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the top
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three
pineapple
-producing countries in a period time from 2009 to 2019
as well as
a breakdown of the price to the consumer of
pineapple
in 2019.
Overall
, the quantity of
pineapple
exports
are
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is
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presented by 2 two distinctive columns which use metric tonnes to show the production of
pineapple
from each
country
.
Observable
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, the figures for
country
A
reach
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reached
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the peak of the chart in 2019,
while
the production of
country
C in 2009 hit the bottom out at about less than a million. There is
also
a diagram showing the proportion of the cost to the consumer of each
pineapple
in 2019. Seven breakdowns are divided, the highest is distribution and retail
while
account for 4% - reach the lowest point are
export
costs. In 2009 the figure
of
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pineapple
export
from
country
A
is
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was
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a little bit more than 1 million but it has skyrocketed to more than 10 million in 2019. Needless to say, in 2019 every single
country
witnessed a
numerous
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large
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decline in the proportion of
pineapple
export
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exports
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. Distribution and retail account for more than a third of the total and it is much more higher than the rest. The other costs that made up the total cost were
export
cost
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costs
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, international transport costs, …
.which
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which
were less than a quarter of the total proportion.
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