Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year . Some people argue that the money should spent on improving living standards on Earth . Do you agree or disagree ?

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year ,
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think that living standards on Earth should provide more and more .
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new planet that
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can adapt to build
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life .
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control of overpopulation , the Earth
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finance
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of living to provide
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humans
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that living conditions will be improved ,
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environment will be less polluted .
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or buildings
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citizens
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so that the
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accommodations
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spent on
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research or
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of life are valid arguments for individuals to consider .
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necessary
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institutes
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task response
Make sure to fully address all aspects of the prompt and clearly state your position in the introduction.
coherence cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas in a more logical and cohesive manner.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and appropriate language.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve accuracy.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • scientific discoveries
  • cutting-edge technology
  • pioneering research
  • socio-economic development
  • improved healthcare
  • education
  • poverty alleviation
  • infrastructure
  • balanced approach
  • cost-effective
  • prioritize
  • allocate
  • resources
  • budget
  • investment
  • sustainable development
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