The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.
The table represents the changes and predictions in the quantity of different fast food eaten in Melbourne in units.
Overall
, more of all variants of food will be consumed in the future than in the past and
this
trend might be particularly true for salads because even though
the
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junk food like hamburgers will experience a growth in numbers, the
numbers
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number
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of plates of salads ordered right now will be more than twice the current figure. The foods that recorded the most
demands
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demand
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; hamburgers,
fried
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chicken in 2005, at 40 and 35 (units) respectively will be in more demand in 20 years at 51 and 45 respectively. Consumption of salads which was originally 5 ( units) will be more than triple its current figure in 2025 at 41. As the years advanced, more people ate fried rice and noodles with the present numbers 9 and 8 respectively but it is expected that in years to come it
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remain the same for rice and grow only slightly to 1 unit.
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