Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transportHowever it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Bicycle
has been seen as a green and clean transport
, riding bicycles is the main way for people
’s commute. On the surface, it’s a lifestyle change, but on the deep level, it reflects and demonstrates many deep factors in society. To promote wider application among the nation, there are some reasons about it and adjustments in the forthcoming paragraph.
The primary reason why
is the way Rephrase
apply
people
may be unfamiliar with it. In the past years, car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus is
the main Wrong verb form
buses have been
choice
for Fix the agreement mistake
choices
people
’s travel. People
need time to change their transport
habit
, which are built Fix the agreement mistake
habits
by
many years. Change preposition
over
For example
, in Guangzhou China, many people
have a car belong
them, Wrong verb form
belonging to
they
lose the power to inspire them to Correct word choice
and they
riding
. Change the verb form
ride
Nevertheless
, with the co-operate bicycle’s
promotion, Change noun form
bicycle
People
in Guangzhou find bicycle
is a good alternative tool rather than car
, which can reduce the time and money they afford. Add an article
a car
the car
Therefore
, bicycle
has been a major way for people
.
On the other hand
, the method that can improve the bicycle
use percentage of the
all Remove the article
apply
transport
is to achieve the rules about the bicycle
by government
. Individuals are willing to select bicycles when they are ensure there are relative rules Correct article usage
the government
can
help them. Correct pronoun usage
that can
For instance
, Shenzhen a city in China has ordered a series of principles to support people
using bicycles. Such
as marking the special path only for bicycle
passing and the field for bicycle
parking. Those steps strongly enhance the environment for bicycle
and lead more and more Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
people
accede
Add the particle
to accede
in
the riding group.
Change preposition
to
To conclude
, the promotion of the bicycle
is required
the attention of citizens and Change the verb form
has required
rule makers
. Under both of Add a hyphen
rule-makers
them
hard work, the Change the pronoun
their
bicycle
can be a vital transport
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