The two maps show a park in 1920 and in present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

These maps illustrate Grange

Park

in 1920 and now.

Overall

, the location of seats and gardens have been changed and the

park

which was

initially

surrounded by more

of

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nature now has more recent constructions for leisure and entertainment.

In

addition

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addition,

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there is a new entrance to the car

park

. In 1920, there was a fountain which was situated in the centre , a stage for musical

artistes

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just to

left

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of the fountain, an aquatic habitat for plants

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to the West and a Glasshouse to the right of the entrance from Eldon Street. There were seats on the left side of the two entrances from both Eldon

street

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and Arnold

avenue

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similarly

there was a place to sit just to the right of the glasshouse. Today, all seats are arranged in the centre, all surrounding one Rose garden and the space for the pond has been enlarged to create space to build a cafe and playground for children

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in the same way, the glasshouse has been replaced with a water feature and the stage torn down and substituted with an amphitheatre.

Furthermore

, an entrance to an underground car

park

has been set up just outside the

park

to the West.