Some think dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A set of individuals believe that

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life-threatening, intense

sports

such

as skydiving and rock climbing should be prohibited from being enjoyed by

people

. From my viewpoint, I disagree with

this

notion as adventure lovers are thrilled by engaging in these types of

sports

and they

also

encourage them to maintain physical stamina.

Firstly

,

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adventure seekers all around the world are developing an endless yearning to accept

challenges

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of enjoying risky

sports

by actively participating in them.

This

has led them to follow their passion

while

considering it as a self-motivation for them.

Moreover

,

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taking part in these fitness activities

help

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them to realize a sense of accomplishment for them.

For instance

, in the UK, Bunjee jumping and parachuting

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been considered as few of the most demanded and enjoyed

sports

in the amusement parks in

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recent years.

Secondly

, the sportspersons who participate in these dangerous

sports

are always encouraged to maintain

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better physical stamina throughout their life as

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body balance, muscle endurance and physical activeness have an immense impact on it.

Furthermore

, mental stability is

also

equally imperative as determination and perseverance act as essential traits that should be well developed when doing these

sports

.

For example

, nowadays artificial intelligence has developed therapeutic treatments for phobias related to great heights suffered by patients.

This

is to create the mental readiness of

people

for risky and challenging

sports

. In conclusion,

although

some

people

think that

sports

that arouse

adrenalin

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rush should be forbidden by the government, I am

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the opinion that they shouldn’t be banned as these recreational activities are better stimulators for adventure thrillers and

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people

who are concerned

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maintaining a proper balance of physical and mental well-being.