Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Contrary to other opinions, the government of a society have more roles to play than they seem to acknowledge.
While
a number of citizens have the perception that the government should have a separate budget to fund programs that will improve the
society, the rest think they should rather support the growth of Correct article usage
apply
art oriented
programs.Add a hyphen
art-oriented
This
essay will explain why I prefer the financial investment in art oriented
Add a hyphen
art-oriented
program
better. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
Firstly
, it will save on cost and secondly
if well managed,funding the artistic projects is geared towards individual empowerment that
Correct pronoun usage
which
also
means a better environment
.
It is more budget friendly
for the political administration of a society. Because most community development projects necessitate millions of gross income, a cheaper alternative is available which will still be of benefit to the civilisation. Add a hyphen
budget-friendly
For
example
when the Add a comma
example,
vision
2010 plan for Nigeria kickstarted in 2007, the Capitalize word
Vision
then
administration of President Yaradua estimated 10 billion naira
which was almost half of the nation's national income meanwhile an alternative like TY Bello's photography scheme only required 25% of the same amount. If frugal decisions are not made other areas of a country's development would suffer the consequences.
Artistic programs that focus on individual development and empowerment will ultimately be of benefit to the Change to a plural noun
nairas
environment
in the long run. Though it may not seem like it at the beginning, a popular saying goes thus
: " empower an individual and you empower a nation". Only motivated and patriotic citizens will consider their
improvement and betterment of their vicinities so it is high time the investment in Human Resources and Change the word
the
skills
is practised. A perfect example was the contributions made by Capitalize word
Skills
governor
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Governor
into
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to
pottery institute
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Pottery Institute
this
scheme ended up generating thousands of youths that
started their own businesses and in Correct pronoun usage
who
fact
went ahead to support other Add a comma
fact,
non governmental
organisations. In Add a hyphen
non-governmental
summary
funding artists can improve the Add a comma
summary,
environment
.
In conclusion,we may never have closure on the long debated
issue Add a hyphen
long-debated
on
whether larger sums of money should be pumped into the economy or into artistic organisations but Change preposition
of
this
essay has been able to explain why the latter option is cost friendly
and that it Add a hyphen
cost-friendly
also
improves the environment
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task response
Ensure that all aspects of the prompt are addressed in the essay. Discuss why funding artistic programs is better than funding environmental programs in more detail.
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lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and academic language. Avoid repetitive phrasing.
grammatical range
Improve your sentence structure and grammar. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence construction.
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