The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents
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surveys
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results that
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in three different years about one university.
Overall
, the most significant increase was in electronic
resources
.
However
, print
resources
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the highest among all aspects. Building and teaching facilities remained the same percentage over the years. Beginning
from
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2000, the percentage of students with good ratings in electronic
resources
grew considerably and reached 88% in 2010 which was
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45% in 2000.
Nonetheless
, the print
resources
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the highest in both 2000 and 2005 with 87% and 89% respectively, but in 2010 both print
resources
and electronic
resources
share the same proportion
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88%. The remaining aspects
does
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not show a big rise, In fact the range of modules offered decreased to 27% from 32%. Building and teaching facilities remained steady
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77% throughout the years.
Lastly
, the technical quality showed a fluctuation in the percentage and
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at 69% in 2010.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words resources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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