The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents
a
Correct article usage
apply
surveys
results that Change the noun form
survey
made
in three different years about one university.
Add a missing verb
were made
Overall
, the most significant increase was in electronic resources
. However
, print resources
was
the highest among all aspects. Building and teaching facilities remained the same percentage over the years.
Beginning Change the verb form
were
from
2000, the percentage of students with good ratings in electronic Change preposition
in
resources
grew considerably and reached 88% in 2010 which was at
45% in 2000. Change preposition
apply
Nonetheless
, the print resources
was
the highest in both 2000 and 2005 with 87% and 89% respectively, but in 2010 both print Change the verb form
were
resources
and electronic resources
share the same proportion with
88%.
The remaining aspects Change preposition
of
does
not show a big rise, In fact the range of modules offered decreased to 27% from 32%. Building and teaching facilities remained steady Change the verb form
do
with
77% throughout the years. Change preposition
at
Lastly
, the technical quality showed a fluctuation in the percentage and stoped
at 69% in 2010.Correct your spelling
stopped
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words resources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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