Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I impressively disagree with
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opinion that every student has to learn about
history
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journey without considering
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majority of their study.
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about
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topic and provide some instances as well. The first reason
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my disagreement about
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idea might rooted in my unwillingness to
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lesson. When I
had been
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going to school, I always didn't like any lessons that related to
history
and unfortunately,
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leave
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me alone until today.
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, I think because of my empathy with
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want
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to learn
history
without any
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about that, I wouldn't like to force anyone to pass
this
field of study neither in school
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university.
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, in my view,
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any
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to
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do any
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is not acceptable to me.
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I believe that the efficient way to learn something either
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course
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in university or
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personal abilities, is
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passion and
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choosing
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of
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, concurrently.
However
, I argue that
history
not only could give us plenty of impressive experiences but
also
it might maintain us from possible dangerous
occourrance
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occurrence
occurrences
that happened to our past generation because we could prepare ourselves for that in advance, I think forcing people is always lead to
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unpleasant
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feeling in person about that topic. In conclusion, I believe that
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increase
knowledge
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of people about
history
, it would be essential to explore the importance of that in society
instead
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mading
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making
them
to
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learn that in university.
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Provide specific reasons and examples to support your disagreement. Clarify why you are unwilling to take history lessons and provide examples from personal experience or observations.
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