38.The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graphs display the cases of marriage and
divorce
from 1970 to 2000 and the marital status of individuals in the same period of time in the United States.
Overall
, marriage decreased during the years
, while
divorce
fluctuated. The significant feature of the secod
graph is that married people had a many times greater percentage than any other status in both Correct your spelling
second
years
.
In 1970, 2.5 million
of
individuals were married and Change preposition
apply
this
was maintained in 1980, but in the next 10 years
, it dropped moderately by 0.1 million
, while
in 2000 it decline
dramatically to 2 Wrong verb form
declined
million
. There were 1 million
cases of divorce
in 1970, and this
rose sharply in the next 10 years
, to 1.4 million
, then
it went down to 1.1 million
in 1990 and in 2000 it fell back to 1 million
.
Married people had the highest proportion compared to the other status
in both Correct your spelling
states
years
, in 1970, it had a percentage of 70%, while
in 2000 it dropped by 10%, to 60%. Followed by those who were never married, with 15% and 20% in 1970 and 2000 respectively. Widows
people had a similar percentage in both Change the noun form
Widow
years
, in 1970, it was 9% and in the next 30 years
it decreased by 1%. Add a comma
years,
Finally
, there were very few cases of divorce
in 1970, with only 2%, this
grew significantly to 10% in 2000.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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