The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The charts above illustrate the comparison of
energy
production between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, every
energy
have
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an upsurge in 2005 compared to 1995, except
a
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petroleum which
suffers
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from a decrease. Evidently, in both 1995 and 2005, coal and
gas
are
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the most used electricity with
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a slightly
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slightly
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difference.
While
29.63% of
gas
had been produced in 1995 and rose precisely to 30.31% in 2005, Coal had been used a bit above
gas
at 29.80% in 1995 and increased to 30.93% in 2005. Petro,
however
, in 1995 made it to
big
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the big
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three of the most popular
energy
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along with
alongwith
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along with
coal and
gas
at 29.27% but, unfortunately in 2005 it dropped drastically to 19.55% On top of that, even though nuclear power produced the least of all at only 6.40%, it shows
significant
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rise in a decade at 10.10%.
Moreover
, the other
energy
had been exploited at 4.90% in 1995 and went upwards to 9.10% in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • industries
  • electricity usage
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • service sector
  • manufacturing sector
  • residential sector
  • agricultural sector
  • main features
  • summarize
  • reporting
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