A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part-time voluntary unpaid job. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. write a letter to the museum Director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vikram Kallem
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Western University. I am writing
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letter in response to the vacant Voluntary position at the Museum. As I am in the final year of my Bachelors degree,I am desperately looking for
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voluntary positions where I can add that experience to my resume.
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future. Since
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I am
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and Art student I gained
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our culture and arts .
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overview
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our history to the
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.
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fluency is appreciable.
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and good at organising things. In regards
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my schedule ,I am
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available
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weekdays and full day on weekends. Please consider my request and get back to me when you have time. Looking forward to your reply,
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sincerely, Vikram kallem.
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task response
Make sure to address all the points mentioned in the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical structure in your letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more varied expressions.
grammatical range
Pay attention to your grammar and sentence structures.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Voluntary unpaid work
  • Museum Director
  • Intention
  • Contribute
  • Community
  • Art
  • History
  • Skills
  • Qualities
  • Communication
  • Organization
  • Attention to detail
  • Passion
  • Learning
  • Teamwork
  • Availability
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