The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of total
music
selling by three forms of
music
buying approaches, namely streams,
downloads
, and
CDs
purchased from 2011 to 2017.
Overall
, the
music
sales percentage with
downloads
and
CDs
declined throughout the period,
whereas
stream method rates saw significant growth. In 2011, CD buying, which was the most popular way of
music
marketing, accounted for approximately 55%, 20%, and eleven times more than
downloads
and stream methods. Since
then
, the figure for
CDs
purchased has reduced steadily to a bottom of roughly 25% in the
last
year, which was less than others.
Likewise
,
music
listing by
downloads
ways, after rising to just above 40% in 2014, experienced a moderate fall to 30% in 2018.
In contrast
, the number of streams, less than others in the first year, climbed considerably and reached a peak of 40% in the
last
years, nearly 10 and 15 per cent higher than
downloads
and
CDs
.
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