the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information about how energy is used in the average Australian household and the consequences of their
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Overall
, the most energy that people use is heating which is 42%. Linking Words
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, it only produces 15% Linking Words
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the use of water heating which is just about a quarter of 30% is lower than the heating proportion Use synonyms
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in comparison with other energies it is higher. Linking Words
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, other appliances are steady at 15% not lower than refrigeration, cooling and lighting. Linking Words
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, Cooling the lowest use 2% is just about 0%.
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to the percentages of energy used, the other appliance produces 28% Linking Words
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which is 4% lower than water heating . having to say, water heating 32% increases Use synonyms
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On the other hand
, cooling has 3% which is the lowest among them. Heating and refrigeration approximately have the same percentage respectively 15%, and 14%. Linking Words
Last
but not least, lighting is 8% which is lower than others but not cooling.Linking Words
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