The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The table depicts the
price
for
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water in five different cities in Australia - Adelaide, Brisbane,
Melbourne
,
Perth
and Sydney.
Overall
, the highest
price
is in Sydney and in 3 out of 5 cities, the
price
is different between 2 levels of usage (under 125
kiloliter
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and over 125
kiloliter
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kiloliters
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) with the biggest difference in
Perth
.
Moreover
, the average bill per household is highest in
Perth
and lowest in
Melbourne
. The highest charge for water is Sydney with
the
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price
of $0.98 which
applied
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is applied
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for both 2 levels of usage. Applying the same
price
for different volumes of water used is
also
practiced
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in
Melbourne
at the
price
of $0.78. For
Perth
and Adelaide, the differences are much more significant at almost 3 and 2.5 times between $0.42 and $1.50 and $0.42 and $1.00 respectively. The average
price
per household is relatively even between the cities at around $310.
However
, households in
Melbourne
pay the lowest charge at $253 and families in
Perth
have the highest charge at $332.
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