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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #country
It’s argued that learning English in a native country is the most optimal way but isn’t the only option
in
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 studying
this
language
.
This
 essay totally agrees with
this
 opinion because
study
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 abroad can be expensive and online learning is now more accessible for all
students
. Traveling abroad to an
English- speaking
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English-speaking
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 country to learn the
language
 is
considerable
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 time and
money consuming
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. The reason is that these countries often are developed nations with high living costs and require a lot of paperwork in order to visit and stay a long time
while
 learning a
language
 requires a minimal time of 6 months to reach the sufficient level for work and
study
.
For example
, in order to come to the UK, a student will need to apply for a long-term VISA that costs around $400-$700 and pay for the tuition of about $10,000-$20,000 per semester, resulting in a total cost of 20,000-40,000 just for
study
 alone. Another reason is that
students
 can have access to online English
courses
 at all levels to
study
 the
language
 right at
their
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home. These
courses
 can help a pupil
study
 at their own pace and connect with more people from all over the globe rather than a few
number of
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Linguistics
students
 as when they
study
 on-site.
For example
, there are now millions of free
courses
 from the most prestigious universities like Cambridge or Oxford on websites
such
 as Coursera and applications like Duolingo and Drops to help
students
 learn the
language
 completely free and provide certifications if needed. In conclusion, it's best to
study
 English in a native country;
however
,
due to
 the
expensiveness
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 of studying on-site and the availability of online
courses
, it’s now no longer the only option for
students
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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