All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty?

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there is a growing concern evolving around economic inequality between the indigent and the rich. From a personal perspective, the root of

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issue is the income disparity, which will result in deteriorating impacts on the country’s stability. In order to resolve

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phenomenon, it is advisable for the government to impose higher taxes on the high-income groups. Regarding the causes of

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issue, the reason why the gap between the needy and affluent people becomes increasingly wider.

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is because many children come from affluent backgrounds, they learn the way of living from their parents and

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to make a living in the future,

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poverty-stricken people have fewer opportunities to access well-paid jobs to enhance their

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could result in social unrest and the country's sovereignty given that underprivileged households become angry and frustrated with

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problem renders numerous protests and other forms of social unrest.

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can be exemplified by the fact that the French Revolution gave a high tax

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the poor group, which

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unstoppable riots.

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, it hinders the progress of the country as well. In terms of the implication of

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phenomenon, it would be feasible for the authorities to take numerous initiatives to alleviate poverty. One notable way to address

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issue would be imposing new policies called progressive tax. To be specific, the rich would pay a higher percentage of their budget in taxes than the indigent group.

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the funds for subsidies are accumulated by high-income groups,

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, the poor would receive subsidies to improve

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standard of living. Another viable method is that individuals and communities could do voluntary work to gift money and presents

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they can lifted out of extreme poverty. In conclusion, the cause of economic inequality between the rich and the poor is the

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background. It is important for governments to impose heavy taxes on the rich and individuals should do more charity to help the disadvantaged.