Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

From my perspective,every coin has two sides.On the positive side,aircraft could transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where
such
plants hardly grow or are out of season,which
mean
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that more and more people could eat different kinds of food by using
this
way.The amount of hungry people will
decreased
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be decreased
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.On the negative way,
transport
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transporting
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fruits and vegetables
by
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in
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this
way may induce some
healthy
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health
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problem
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problems
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.If the food
isnt
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isn't
fresh enough,
which
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it
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will induce lots of social
problem
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problems
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transportation
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Hardly grow
  • Out of season
  • Advantages
  • Access
  • Variety
  • Demand
  • Reliance
  • Local production
  • Disadvantages
  • Carbon emissions
  • Climate change
  • Expensive
  • Traditional farming practices
  • Opinion
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