More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

The advent of technology

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positive impact on

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urban

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work sector. Most of the

individiuals

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individuals

are shifting to developed cities from their underdeveloped villages in search

for

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new job opportunities. A great hit to the agricultural produce of the nation,

as well as

overcrowding in the city

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are some of the demerits to the above

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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the

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points in detail with ways to tackle

this

concern.

To begin

with, more than two-thirds of the national agricultural produce comes from rural

areas

. Opening multiple doors to various job

oppotunities

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opportunities

in urban localities has a negative impact on the young working population living in suburban

areas

.

As a result

, the backbone of the country which is

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sector will be devoid of helping hands.

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,

according to

a survey, more than eighty per cent of the youngsters living in villages have

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to a nearby city, rendering a shocking 35 per cent downfall in

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overall

agricultural production.

In addition

, as more and more people start commuting to major surrounding urban localities,

this

results in a high proportion of

population

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being squeezed into a relatively small area.

Consequently

, the

availabilty

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availability

of jobs and residences

also

plummet

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drastically.

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, finding work and

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to live has become harder than ever in a city,

due to

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flow of

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incoming individuals from nearby underdeveloped

areas

. To tackle

this

problem, the government ought to implement up-to-date modern services in the lacking agricultural

areas

of

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which have the potential to grow.

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Along with

this

, constructing multinational corporations in the suburbs can

also

play its part in reducing the burden of

this

rising concern.

To sum up

, as

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technological advancements have opened up a lot of job opportunities for individuals, the young population will continue to shift to cities in search

for

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the same. It's the government's responsibility to make all these essential services available in the village itself so that the balance between food

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and

advancemnets

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advancements

advancement

shall not be disrupted.