The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The provided graph compares the changes in the costs of
Copper
, Nickel
and Zinc in all months in
2014.
Change preposition
of
According to
the provided data, the costs of Copper
and Nickel
almost remained the same at the beginning and end of the studied period, while
cost
of Zinc experienced a sharp negative change Add an article
the cost
at the end
of the studied period.
In January 2014, Copper
and Nickel
saw a 2% and a 1% changes
respectively, considering some fluctuations their prices diminished and led to about a -1% fall in July. After that, the costs of Fix the agreement mistake
change
Copper
and Nickel
experienced an upward trend until September reaching +1% and about 0% growth respectively. After a slight decrease in October, their prices saw about a 2% growth in December.
On the other hand
, the change in Zinc was at a positive peak of 6% in January, however
, it started to decrease up to July and reached to
the least price by a -3% reduction. After July, Change preposition
apply
although
prices’ changes had an upward trend, they were negative until,
in November experienced a +1% change to the end of the yearRemove the comma
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