The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
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The provided graph compares the changes in the costs of
Copper
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,
Nickel
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and Zinc in all months
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2014.
According to
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the provided data, the costs of
Copper
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and
Nickel
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almost remained the same at the beginning and end of the studied period,
while
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of Zinc experienced a sharp negative change
at the end
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of the studied period. In January 2014,
Copper
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and
Nickel
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saw a 2% and a 1%
changes
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respectively, considering some fluctuations their prices diminished and led to about a -1% fall in July. After that, the costs of
Copper
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and
Nickel
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experienced an upward trend until September reaching +1% and about 0% growth respectively. After a slight decrease in October, their prices saw about a 2% growth in December.
On the other hand
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, the change in Zinc was at a positive peak of 6% in January,
however
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, it started to decrease up to July and reached
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the least price by a -3% reduction. After July,
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prices’ changes had an upward trend, they were negative until
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in November experienced a +1% change to the end of the year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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