The table below gives information about values (NZ$) of the exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
The table illustrates the variations in the values of the imports of
kiwi
fruit from five different countries from 2010 to 2012, in millions of New Zealand
dollars
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that while
the amount of money
that Japan
, China, and Russia spent on imported kiwi
from New Zealand
soared, Mexico
and Saudi
Arabia
witnessed the opposite trend, with Japan
being the biggest importer.
In detail, the amount of money
that Japan
spent on imported kiwi
from New Zealand
soared from 271 to 325 between 2010 and 2012, followed by China that
increased by 20 Correct pronoun usage
which
million
dollars
from 74 million
dollars
. Similarly
, the period between 2010 and 2012 also
witnessed an upward trend from 968 thousand dollars
to over 2 million
dollars
in the figure for Russia.
In addition
, while
Japan
, China, and Russia allocated more money
for imported kiwi
from New Zealand
, the opposite was true for Mexico
and Saudi
Arabia
. In 2010, the amount of money
that New Zealand
received from exported kiwi
to Mexico
and Saudi
Arabia
was 6 million
dollar
and 290 thousand Change to a plural noun
dollars
dollars
respectively
, Rephrase
apply
then
these two figures went through a period of dramatical Rephrase
respectively
decreased
in 2012, which stood at 3,3 Replace the word
decrease
million
dollars
for Mexico
and 82 thousand dollars
for Saudi
Arabia
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