The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
the bar chart illustrates the percentage of citizen’s income
which
spent in 1968 and 2018 in a country.
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Overall
, it can be seen that more money was Linking Words
spend
on food 35% in 1968, Change the form of the verb
spent
while
the highest share was allocated to leisure activities in 2018 just over 20%.
Food was responsible for 35% of disbursing as highest figure in 1968, as opposed to fuel and power Linking Words
which
the lowest cost Correct your spelling
with
has been
assigned to them Verb problem
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approximately
5% in Change preposition
at approximately
this
year. In 2018, the highest amount of money has been expended on leisure pursuits a little more than 20%, Linking Words
while
fuel Linking Words
and
power and personal goods ranked Correct word choice
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last
about 4%.
The disparity between the two figures Linking Words
of
transport and housing was almost the same in both two years, Change preposition
for
while
the money spent in 2018 was 2 times more than in 1968.
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Finally
, household goods contributed about 7% to spending incomes on it in both 1968 and 2018 years.Linking Words
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