The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the constitution of three different automobiles in the US over a period of 40 years.
Overall
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, over the course of four decades, the number of
trucks
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was the most dominant among cars,
while
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buses
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were the fewest. In 1970, one can see that
trucks
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peaked at around 48%, which was the highest in these categories,
in addition
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, taxis accounted for a quarter and
buses
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for roughly 6%.
While
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being the primary vehicle between 1970 and 2010, there was a significant drop in
trucks
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, which caused taxis to overtake
trucks
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and
became
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the most widely used
vehicles
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vehicle
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for driving.
In addition
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,
buses
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saw the highest point during these decades, which was around 15%. After 1980, there was a steady trend between
trucks
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and
buses
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; the former were rising
while
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buses
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were decreasing. In the same period, the percentage of taxis dropped to approximately 18% and bounced back in 2000, reaching 35%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words trucks, buses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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