Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity do the advantage of this is outweight the disadvantages

In the past, our environment

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provide a vast amount of resources, more than enough for the basic needs of everyone

such

as fuel and energy. Nowadays, there has been a scarcity

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natural resources because of rapid population growth. The needs of

people

are continuously increasing which diminishes the supply of resources. Because of scarcity,

people

are trying to navigate a risky strategy, which can be detrimental not only

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the environment but

also

for

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the

community

. In

this

essay, I will argue that the advantages of looking for new sources in remote and untouched areas to resolve the increasing demand for

gas

and

oil

do not

outweight

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outweigh

the

disadvatages

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disadvantages

.

Firstly

, the significance of mining

gas

and

oil

in various places around the world that have been protected and preserved by the government may bring enough supply to maintain the lifestyle of the

community

.

Moreover

, it may

also

develop the location and serve as another

community

for

people

.

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, if miners relocate to a remote

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, they can build a

community

in the area in which their families can live.

This

development may not only provide

gas

and

oil

to

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society but

also

employment and homes for the

people

.

On the other hand

, there is a high possibility that the environment may be abused and result

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a

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massive pollution because of incessant mining, particularly in the oceans.

For example

, the surrounding seas of China

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been polluted because of numerous companies digging for

oil

around the country.

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of its toxic materials killed

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of living things under the ocean, which affected

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supply and health of the citizens. The

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can stay for decades and its impact is still continuous

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can

also

affect

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. In conclusion, whilst using remote areas to get

for

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gas

and

oil

can bring supplies, employment and homes, it can

also

bring

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massive destruction which can affect our children and their children.