The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different categories.
The graph illustrates the amount of teaching that was given per
year
by each teacher ranging in different grade
.
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grades
Overall
, the USA had the highest time
spent teaching in three levels of education. Additionally
, upper secondary students hold the largest amount of time
that learners spent
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spend
in
each Change preposition
apply
year
.
The figure for Japan and Spain had similarities in the number of time
taught in primary and lower secondary, which accounted for up to 600 hours
spent every year
in two
countries. Followed by Correct article usage
the two
this
figure is that the time
spent teaching upper secondary in Spain is slightly higher than that of Japan, Correct your spelling
occurring
occuring
at almost 1000 Correct your spelling
occurring
hours
each year
As for the remaining two countries, the hours
spent in primary school in Ireland is 600 hours
while
the USA had around 830 hours
taught in comparision
. Correct your spelling
comparison
Similarily
, the Correct your spelling
Similarly
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
hours
teaching lower and upper secondary in Ireland is comparatively around 600 to 580 hours
, the number seem
to fall short of Change the verb form
seems
figure
when being compared to the USA, which is around 1140 to 1150 Add an article
the figure
a figure
hours
, respectively a year
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