Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
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mode, which most developed countries have been using. Trains engine capacities are higher than the local bus but comparing the total amount of public Use synonyms
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it decreases the consumption of fuel which is used by a train engine. So being an ecofriendly womanLinking Words
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a plethora of people. We can go for our destinate earlier than our time. Use synonyms
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, accidents, time-wasting, fuel consumption and environmental pollution are decreased.
In conclusion, by constructing Railways we have great facilities rather than developing roads and the government can reduce the unnecessary events of accidents and diseases combined with pollution.Linking Words
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