Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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infrastructure facilities and any other guides relevant to categorization. Most governments spend a lot of money on railways than public roads. In
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essay, I would like to briefly explain the reasons; for fully agreeing with
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topic. As a new generation woman, I would like to see about
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point so, railways are eco-friendly
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mode, which most developed countries have been using. Trains engine capacities are higher than the local bus but comparing the total amount of public
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buses it is lower.
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, one train releases too little carbon dioxide ( Co2) rather than 100 buses and one train can provide more
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facilities to a plethora of transporters. In the rails, They use their own common way to run and stop. So
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that reason, we can decrease traffic jams, which is a great problem for urban areas. Not only that but
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it decreases the consumption of fuel which is used by a train engine. So being an ecofriendly woman
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is a great idea that has been government taken. Neither, eco-friendly nor the head to traffic violence.
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, enter to Colombo City, we had to wait in long queues for a number of big and small vehicles. Some use a vehicle to self-
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him/her it's required, but in my view if we use trains to
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a plethora of people. We can go for our destinate earlier than our time.
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, accidents, time-wasting, fuel consumption and environmental pollution are decreased. In conclusion, by constructing Railways we have great facilities rather than developing roads and the government can reduce the unnecessary events of accidents and diseases combined with pollution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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