The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant
The bar chart and table demonstrate the data about visitors who have a trip to Australia, and
also
additional information about their stay.
Overall
, it could be seen that there are several countries who visited Australia country, and the first place Asian
citizens, the second is individuals from Europe.
According to
the chart, Asian
people dominate among other countries with 37 per cent, while
visitors from the US are two times lower. The least number of travellers are from other countries, they constitute merely 10 per cent.
Turning to the table, American tourists
have the same activity as individuals from Asia. However
European tourists
are keen on swimming and sunbathing activities and tourists
from other regions are interested in surfing. The most common accommodation for Asian
travellers is a 5-star hotel, while
the folks from America are a 4-star hotel. European tourists
have similar accommodations to tourists
from other regions, it's camping and caravan. The most interesting thing is that American
tourist's average stay is two times longer than Correct article usage
an American
Asian
tourist's stay (7 days).Correct article usage
an Asian
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asian, tourists with synonyms.
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