“Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?”
Nowadays, there has been a big debate about whether the government should provide expensive technology
such
as videos or DVDs or not. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, I disagree with the given notion Linking Words
due to
several reasons Linking Words
such
as different techniques of learning namely listening and reading, and the topic's variances which I will expatiate in the following paragraphs with lucid examples.
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To begin
with, the foremost reason for disagreeing is that, the ways of learning are different for each individual like watching, listening and reading. Linking Words
According to
an American survey, 80% of students have different needs related to grasping information, Linking Words
for instance
, learning by watching channels on YouTube. Linking Words
Moreover
, there are a few topics which could be better understood by watching DVDs, taking the example of human bones and organs. Linking Words
Hence
, providing these items at public libraries would be significant for learners.
Apart from that, Linking Words
although
textbooks play a crucial role in education, a number of books are outdated which confuses learners Linking Words
as well as
educators. To explain Linking Words
further
, the old editions of the books have less or wrong information which can not meet their goals. Medical students, Linking Words
for example
, always need updated information which can only be fulfilled by the Internet. Linking Words
Furthermore
, some children need the internet to complete their assignments because of not having personal computers at home. Linking Words
Thus
, a variety of resources like high tech should be necessary in these locations.
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To conclude
, there is no doubt that books have their own importance, society needs all materials in public classrooms, Linking Words
in addition
, to software, and videos. I am not in favour of the uppermost statement because providing different teaching methods is not only helpful for students but it would make education easy to access. Linking Words
However
, the high authorities should focus on all resources, including textbooks.Linking Words
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