The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The provided bar chart compares the United States
households
’ quantity in five ranges of earnings over a 7-year
period
.
Overall
, the
number
of
households
with lower incomes and the highest
income
increased
at the end
of the study
period
,
while
the
number
of
medium earned
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households
remained unchanged during the studied
period
. In 2007, 25
million
and 27
million
of
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the
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US
households
earned less than $25,000 and $25,000 - $49,000 respectively.
Also
, 20
million
had a
medium
income
from $50,000 to $74,999.
Furthermore
, more than the
medium
income
$
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75,000 - $99,000 was earned by the least
number
of
households
about 15
million
,
however
the highest
income
, more than $100,000 was earned by the most
number
of
households
about 29.5
million
. Notably, these trends continued to the end of the studied
period
.
Repeatedly in
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2015, the most
number
of
households
about 34
million
had the most earnings.
Also
, the
households
, who earned
medium
or more than
medium
money almost, remained unchanged.
Finally
,
households
with the lowest or more than the lowest
income
increased, reaching 26
million
and 26.5
million
respectively in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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