The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram
illustrate
a process of making a storage field from a material as known concrete canvas.
Change the verb form
illustrates
Overall
, it can be seen that whole
process is divided Correct article usage
the whole
in
eight Change preposition
into
step
Change to a plural noun
steps
following
by manufacturing, delivering, unwrapping, spreading, pumping air inside, watering, setting and storing.
Wrong verb form
followed
Firstly
, by use of dry concrete manufacturing the fibrous top surface and waterproof layer. Next,
delivering, unwrapping and spreding
on the ground around 10 metres with Correct your spelling
spreading
use
of pegs and rope. After that, in the area of underground pumping air from Correct article usage
the use
opposite
Add an article
the opposite
site
of Correct your spelling
side
door
.Add an article
the door
Then
, up to 8 metres height
Change preposition
in height
spreying
the water around Correct your spelling
spraying
covering
.
Correct article usage
the covering
Lastly
, leave the area 20
-24 hours and Change preposition
for 20
finally
, storing
place is ready for Verb problem
the storage
put
the stuff inside.Wrong verb form
putting
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