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Address the advantages and disadvantages in a more balanced way. Provide more specific examples and evidence to support your ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a clearer and more logical progression of ideas throughout the essay. Use cohesive devices, such as linking words and phrases, to improve the coherence.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary range to express your ideas more precisely and effectively. Avoid repetitive language and explore synonyms to add variety to your essay.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammar accuracy. Use a wider range of sentence structures and sentence types to demonstrate your grammatical range and control.
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