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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in office every day. Work from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no denying the fact that in
this
 modern life, people are less accepting Of the rules of working at offices.
While
 it is a commonly held belief that the majority of society tends to
work
 from their comfort homes, there is
also
 an argument opposing it.
To begin
 with, home
workers
 show a significant improvement more than officers. It is
also
 possible to say that, homes are less stressful and provide flexibility more than company's offices.
therefore
, a lot of
workers
 and managers like to
work
 from their houses because they feel that
this
 saves them time.
For example
,
this
 reduces the waste of time in transportation and give the freedom for both employees and bosses to schedule their life as they want. Another point to consider,
this
 affects positively people who have difficulties
such
 as social and health issues.
In other words
, folks with
this
 opportunity show us a huge difference in the quality and commitment compared to office
workers
.
Moreover
,
according to
 the public health institution encouraging member of society to
work
 from their home, could save their lives three times more than out of their comfortable houses.
For instance
, during the pandemic Corona, we could not ignore that not just working, but
also
 shopping, and studying rely on house sitting. In conclusion, despite people having different views,
however
, on balance, I believe that giving your
workers
 the opportunity to
work
 from anywhere they want, will help you to have loyal employees for a long time.
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coherence cohesion
Include a clear introduction and conclusion that summarize the main points of your essay.
lexical resource
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grammatical range
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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