Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in office every day. Work from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. Do you agree or disagree?

#computers #modems #office #workers #work #home #employees

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

There is no denying the fact that in

this

Linking Words

modern life, people are less accepting Of the rules of working at offices.

While

Linking Words

it is a commonly held belief that the majority of society tends to

work

Use synonyms

from their comfort homes, there is

also

Linking Words

an argument opposing it.

To begin

Linking Words

with, home

workers

Use synonyms

show a significant improvement more than officers. It is

also

Linking Words

possible to say that, homes are less stressful and provide flexibility more than company's offices.

therefore

Linking Words

, a lot of

workers

Use synonyms

and managers like to

work

Use synonyms

from their houses because they feel that

this

Linking Words

saves them time.

For example

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

reduces the waste of time in transportation and give the freedom for both employees and bosses to schedule their life as they want. Another point to consider,

this

Linking Words

affects positively people who have difficulties

such

Linking Words

as social and health issues.

In other words

Linking Words

, folks with

this

Linking Words

opportunity show us a huge difference in the quality and commitment compared to office

workers

Use synonyms

Moreover

Linking Words

according to

Linking Words

the public health institution encouraging member of society to

work

Use synonyms

from their home, could save their lives three times more than out of their comfortable houses.

For instance

Linking Words

, during the pandemic Corona, we could not ignore that not just working, but

also

Linking Words

shopping, and studying rely on house sitting. In conclusion, despite people having different views,

however

Linking Words

, on balance, I believe that giving your

workers

Use synonyms

the opportunity to

work

Use synonyms

from anywhere they want, will help you to have loyal employees for a long time.

Submitted by rayan on Thu Nov 02 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific main point or argument and develop it coherently.

coherence cohesion

Include a clear introduction and conclusion that summarize the main points of your essay.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas and arguments.

grammatical range

Pay attention to verb tenses and sentence structures to ensure grammatical accuracy.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

12
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

250 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that the number of people who are fascinated with collecting information about the history of the buildings or flats that they live in is increasing. There might be some reasons, such as gaining information about that, and some steps should be taken, like using technology or the elderly to realize the past of neighbourhoods or buildings.
<4
band
Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .
The table shows the total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment during the year. The pie charts illustrate the results of surveys of visitor satisfaction with titles such as “Very satisfied, Satisfied, Dissatisfied, Very Dissatisfied and No response” in percentage.
7.5
band
These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
Is it right to say that dressing sense is a dynamic commodity? Either it has an advantageous or disadvantageous impact on society. In my perspective, this changing style in clothing and fashion affects different age groups in both ways. The following paragraphs will elaborate my point of view with supporting evidence.
<4
band
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some people that it is more better for particular group of adolscents to study with classmates together on a project, while for others better to study themselves. Despite studying alone can gives more freedom for students making tasks more individually, to study in a collective more beneficial, for having more interesting process, and communication skill development.
4.5
band
Question B Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)
I agreed with the statement that The ceo and executives must be a leader and symbolic of their company. some of them are very famous but l am sure all of them have their own experience and knowledge that means they must come with high salary that the company must have to pay depending on their contract.

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in office every day. Work from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .

These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Question B Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)