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46.The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

46.The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table displays information about the quantity of
waste
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 produced between 1980 and 2000 in six different nations.
Overall
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, the United States had the highest
amount
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 of
waste
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 in all the
years
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,
while
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 Ireland had the least. The other significant feature of the table is that the
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 of Japan increased over the
years
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. The United States had many times more
waste
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 than other countries, in 1980, it had 131
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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, and
this
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 grew by 20
million
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 in the next 10
years
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, to 151
million
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tonnes
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,
at the end
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 of the
period
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, the United States remained to be the nation with the highest
amount
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 of
waste
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 with 192
million
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tonnes
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. Followed by Japan with 28
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980, in the next 10
years
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 it rose to 32
million
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tonnes
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, ending the
period
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 with 53
million
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tonnes
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. Ireland is the nation with the least
amount
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 of
waste
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, in 1980, it only had 0.6
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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, but there were no data about the
amount
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 of
waste
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 in 1990 in 2000, it ended the
period
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 with 5
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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. Portugal is a nation that does not produce a high
amount
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 of
waste
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, in 1980 it produced 2
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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, and
this
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 increased by 1
million
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tonnes
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 in the next 10
years
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, and ended the
period
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 with 5
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, amount, years, million, tonnes, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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