53.Many countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so? What can be done to change their views?

It is argued that many nations think that global tourism causes bad effects. The main reason for
is because of the disrespectful behaviour of the
, and the most viable solution is to tell the things that
cannot do. Citizens of a place think that
are destroying their
because of the bad behaviour and character that some
have. An increasing number of transport demand, for travelling from one place to another, causes a decrease in the air quality.
. it occurs
as a result
of throwing rubbish on the floor and in natural environments
of throwing it on containers, causing a rise in pollution. Recent research concluded that in European countries, during holiday seasons, the number of
increases, causing higher contamination. Communicating in advance to the
about what are not allowed to do will prevent bad actions. Before travelling to any
normally will look for information about the
. Making aware since the beginning that they cannot perform certain activities that might damage the nation and about the consequences that it may have if they carry out these actions, will reduce the harmful effects.
For instance
, in some European countries if the police or someone sees someone doing something that will damage the
or the environment,
, that person will get a sanction. In conclusion, individuals think that tourism will damage their
because of the actions that some
do in their nation,
can be solved by making the
aware of what is forbidden to do in that
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation


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