The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The following charts illustrate the value of Australia's trade with China, Japan and the United States between 2004 to 2009. Units are measured in Australian
dollars
.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that 2008 was the year with the highest peak of both exports and imports in the three countries analyzed.
For instance
, when talking about exports, Japan is the
leader
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country amongst the others with a value of 40 billion Australian
dollars
in 2008. It is closely followed by China, with an export rate reaching more than 30 billion
dollars
in 2009.
Finally
, the United States sits in third place with less than 10 billion
dollars
for every year recorded in the study.
Furtheremore
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Furthermore
, we can notice that imports experienced fewer changes than exports, with a
steadily
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trend of almost 20
billions
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billion
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for Japan from 2004 to 2009, which was almost the same
to
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for
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the United States with just above 20
billions
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billion
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in the
spand
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span
of 6 years.
This
differs from Australia's trade with China, in which the rate kept climbing from the starting year to reach a peak in 2008 and
drop
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suddenly in 2009.
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