Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, plenty of students rather

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have a part-time job than totally focus on the academic grades, because they consider working experience

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more vital than the

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learned at school. Personally, I agree with

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it. The theories and concepts

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a crucial role in the profession.

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knowledge

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the basis of the subject, you can not work without it.

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, as a physiotherapist, understanding the mechanisms, the movements and the pathology of each region

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body is absolutely vital. Without knowing

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, the therapist will not

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to assess and treat the patients.

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knowledge

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practical skills could be more useful in

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workplace.

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not that many types of difficulties, which

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professionals will confront in their career.

For instance

, physiotherapists only provide patients with certain treatments because these techniques could be enough for all the patients in the clinic.

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we learned about the

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which is more than thirty kinds of disabilities at school, most of them will not be utilized.

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, not only the practical skills but

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the social experience could be important for a student to confront the barrier.

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students are working, they will face enormous kinds of situations,

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a result, they need to brainstorm

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solutions or answer the mean customers by themselves. These

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could assist them

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difficulties in the future. In conclusion, even though

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knowledge

is important, there are some other objects

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be more helpful to a student either in their workplace or

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future lives.