Your friend asked you to find a par-time job for him/her to earn some money while studying. You found a job that might be suitable. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Give him/her the job description • Explain why he/she should take the job • Say what he/she should do to get the job
Dear Frank,
Hope you’re doing well. You would be excited to know that I have found an appropriate temporary part-time
job
for you to earn some amount of money during your study period!
It’s a part-time clerk job
within your university campus only available for graduate students. As you’re going to start your master’s degree in accounting, not only you’re eligible for this
position but also
you might be the most suitable candidate for it. Also
, the pay is really good. You can make $22 per hour and can work up to 20 hours per week.
I think you should apply for this
job
without any doubt. As the job
title and work responsibilities are matching with your profession where you have to manage accounts, it is a great chance to get some hands-on experience while
studying.
For application, you can either apply online or submit an application form in person at the account office located at 325 Clarks Street on the Sexton campus. I would suggest you apply online by signing in on the university’s career portal. In this
way, it will be easier, and you will also
get digital notification updates. Good luck with your application process!
Warm regards,
HarpalSubmitted by harpal.singh on
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Task Response
Make sure to address all the points mentioned in the task prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your ideas and paragraphs in a logical structure.
Lexical Resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.
Grammatical Range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
