The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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graph compares the
quantity
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number
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of
openings
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and
closures
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of shops between 2011 and 2018 in one country.
Overall
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we can see that in these 7 years, the figures for
openings
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and
closures
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have varied depending on the
year
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. Normally we can see that there are more
closures
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than
openings
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,
however
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,
this
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is not always the case and a good example is the
year
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2015. The
closures
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go from 3000 to 8500 per
year
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and
openings
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from 500 to 7100. Between 2012 and 2014
closures
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were higher than
openings
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and
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between 2016 and 2018 too, but there is an exception. In 2015 we can see an enormous decrease in
closures
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and
openings
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too but they stay in their line. The new ones went from 6000 to 4000 but the
closures
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went from 6500 to 500 in only one
year
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.
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, after that strange
year
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, all came back to normality.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words openings, closures, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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