The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph compares the
quantity
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of
openings
and
closures
of shops between 2011 and 2018 in one country.
Overall
we can see that in these 7 years, the figures for
openings
and
closures
have varied depending on the
year
. Normally we can see that there are more
closures
than
openings
,
however
,
this
is not always the case and a good example is the
year
2015. The
closures
go from 3000 to 8500 per
year
and
openings
from 500 to 7100. Between 2012 and 2014
closures
were higher than
openings
and
then
between 2016 and 2018 too, but there is an exception. In 2015 we can see an enormous decrease in
closures
and
openings
too but they stay in their line. The new ones went from 6000 to 4000 but the
closures
went from 6500 to 500 in only one
year
.
Nevertheless
, after that strange
year
, all came back to normality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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