The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The following graph demonstrates the
number
of demands that have been received by the Tourist Information Office in a city, from January to June
2011.
As a whole, the trend of inquiries which have been done in person is rising steadily, and the summit of it,
is in Remove the comma
apply
June
. In contrast
, the number
of letters or emails was falling dramatically. The numbe
of pleas by telephone had some fluctuations, but generally, its trend is climbing.
Correct your spelling
number
According to
the data, the number
of people
who came, and asked their need face to face, was a bit more than 400 individuals, then
it had a sharp rise in April, and more than 1200 people
used this
method. Finally
, in June
, it reached its peak and about 2000 people
pleaded in person.
Moving on to the letters, more than 600 people
sent emails in January, but the figures fell gradually during February and March. Suddenly in April, the number
of letters decreased abruptly to less than 600.
The telephone method began with a good amount, more than 800 people
, then
it rose inconsistently. The number
of telephone calls stayed the same in April, but after that, it climbed noticeably and reached 1600 people
in June
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