What are the advantages and diadvantages of working remotely? What is the future of remote work? Include any relevant example from your own experience.

Nowadays, thank to
advancement
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the advancement
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of technology, many
employees
are able to
work
in flexible location
instead
of fixed positions. I believe
this
trend is appropriate in contemporary society and I will reveal more
my
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perspective in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, working in remote areas makes enterprise owners
hard
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to control their staff's discipline. To be more specific, when
employees
work
in their
home
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homes
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or some areas out of their offices they may no longer obey some company's policies
such
as punctuality,
uniform
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abiding. Gradually, the enterprise's culture may be demolished and workers
even
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do not have
awareness
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the awareness
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to preserve the identity of their working places.
Moreover
, the relationship between colleagues
are
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also
waned if they do not interact regularly and directly with each
others
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. As
the
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result, the productivity and solidary spirit of
companies
may be affected seriously.
On the other hand
, letting
employees
to
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do their
work
in flexible location
also
indicate some advantages for enterprises
especially
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finance
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in finance
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and health matters. Illustration, being a lower number of
employees
in the workplace can give
company's
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company
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owners a chance to rearrange working space from a large to a narrower one. By doing
this
, the operation cost including rental or consumed energy
cost
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might
reduce
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significantly. At the same time, in
the
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modern life, the appearance of infectious diseases
such
as Covid-19 can interrupt some commercial activities of
companies
if some
employee
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employees
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are infected.
Therefore
, online working is a plausible method for
this
situation. In conclusion, I personally think that remote
work
is the modern trend in current times. Depending on
operating
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type of individual
companies
, managers can apply flexibility between online and direct
works
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work
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in order to optimize the benefits of their
companies
.
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