The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The chart and

table

Use synonyms

illustrate the number of population in Japan by two features millions and percentages.

Overall

Linking Words

, it can be clearly seen that

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

the population made an upgrade

Change preposition

apply

show examples

over the year 1950 until 2005

then

Linking Words

begin

Wrong verb form

began

show examples

to dwindle.

where as

Correct your spelling

whereas

show examples

the

table

Use synonyms

show

Change the verb form

shows

show examples

an increase in the whole

years

Fix the agreement mistake

year

show examples

by 16 per cent.

Glasing

Correct your spelling

Glancing

at the chart and

table

Use synonyms

reveals that, the population

start

Wrong verb form

started

show examples

to rise from the year 1950 by 84.1

millions

Change to singular

million

show examples

while

Linking Words

in the

table

Use synonyms

only 4.1

millions

Change to singular

million

show examples

in addition

Linking Words

the figures begin to rise

hardly

Change the word

hard

show examples

acheive

Correct your spelling

achieve

hight

Correct your spelling

high

show examples

number of humans at 127.8 million when we compare with

tha

Correct your spelling

the

table

Use synonyms

it was 25.7 M with a 20.0 cent .

Moreover

Linking Words

, the ages

flactuated

Correct your spelling

fluctuated

fluctuate

in the years 2035 and 2055, between 37.3 and 36.5 with a per cent of 34.0 and 41.0

Therefore

Linking Words

, the number

were

Correct subject-verb agreement

was

show examples

low in the chart exactly in the year 2035

then

Linking Words

drop

Wrong verb form

dropped

show examples

drastically in

the

Change the article

apply

show examples

2055 at 89.9 m.

alihafiidFri Nov 03 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words table with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

▼

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Some individuals insist that parents are responsible for educating their children so that they can be good citizens in a social community, whereas others think that schooling is the best way. Although teachers and classmates play an important role to some extent, I think it is basically a job for parents to lead their children to contribute to society.
6.5
band
109.Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that social and practical issues may arise when people live in nations where they need to speak foreign languages. This essay completely agrees with this statement because it causes problems at work and mental problems.
8
band
Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for somene to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. in your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement on the local council board.
7
band
Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Environmental issues have become global problems. As a result, it is generally claimed that solving this problem can be best achieved through all countries together, however, others think it is the best way to fix with their country alone. I personally agree with the idea that solving environmental problems should be done globally.
6.5
band
Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Our dietary choices influence our overall well-being. As a result, some believe that people have become increasingly reliant on processed meals and that there is too much sugar in the food and beverage goods available on the market. Therefore, the government should levy a surcharge on items with high sugar content. I agree with this approach, and in the following paragraphs, I shall elaborate on my viewpoint.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.

109.Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?