The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and

table

illustrate the number of population in Japan by two features millions and percentages.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that

,

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the population made an upgrade

up

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over the year 1950 until 2005

then

begin

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to dwindle.

where as

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the

table

show

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an increase in the whole

years

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by 16 per cent.

Glasing

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Glancing

at the chart and

table

reveals that, the population

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to rise from the year 1950 by 84.1

millions

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while

in the

table

only 4.1

millions

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in addition

the figures begin to rise

hardly

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to

acheive

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achieve

a

hight

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number of humans at 127.8 million when we compare with

tha

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the

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it was 25.7 M with a 20.0 cent .

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, the ages

flactuated

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fluctuated

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in the years 2035 and 2055, between 37.3 and 36.5 with a per cent of 34.0 and 41.0

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, the number

were

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low in the chart exactly in the year 2035

then

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drastically in

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2055 at 89.9 m.