The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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depicts the typical number of UK people who have been commuting since 1970 and

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estimated to

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have commuted by 2030

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based on the means of transport including car,

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and

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. Looking at the

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perspective, the car is ranked first for commuting among others.

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, using the

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overtook the

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between 2010 and 2015 and it is predicted

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tendency will widely continue by 2030. In terms of the frequency of passengers who chose a car for travelling, the

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began with 5

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travellers in 1970 and after experiencing a slight rise, the

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steadily went up to over 5

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in 1980 and 7

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in 2000 and

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upward trend, it is anticipated that the

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chart will witness approximately 9 millions of

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of cars by 2030. With regards to other travelling ways, the

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shows 4

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passengers using the buses,

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value was just above 2

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for those who chose the

train

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for Travel. The decreasing

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indicating the number of

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and the increasing

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of the number of

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users

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crossed each other in 2015 (at the point of around 3.5

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users

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) in which the people who travelled by

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overnumbered those who chose the

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. In

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regard, it is expected that

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trend will be unchanged until 2030.