The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given
line
graph
depicts the typical number of UK people who have been commuting since 1970 and
is
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are
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estimated to
will
Verb problem
apply
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have commuted by 2030
categorizing
Wrong verb form
categorised
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based on the means of transport including car,
bus
and
train
. Looking at the
overall
perspective, the car is ranked first for commuting among others.
Moreover
, using the
train
overtook the
bus
between 2010 and 2015 and it is predicted
this
tendency will widely continue by 2030. In terms of the frequency of passengers who chose a car for travelling, the
line
graph
began with 5
million
travellers in 1970 and after experiencing a slight rise, the
graph
steadily went up to over 5
million
in 1980 and 7
million
in 2000 and
following
this
upward trend, it is anticipated that the
line
chart will witness approximately 9 millions of
users
of cars by 2030. With regards to other travelling ways, the
graph
shows 4
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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passengers using the buses,
while
this
value was just above 2
million
for those who chose the
train
for Travel. The decreasing
line
indicating the number of
users
of
bus
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buses
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and the increasing
line
of the number of
train
users
crossed each other in 2015 (at the point of around 3.5
million
users
) in which the people who travelled by
train
overnumbered those who chose the
bus
. In
this
regard, it is expected that
this
trend will be unchanged until 2030.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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