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What do you do at the weekend generally? Where do you like to spend time with your friends? port. Now write a letter answering your penfriend's questions

#weekend #time #friends #port #penfriend #questions
Dear Sam, I am writing to you
with
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about
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 what I do at
weekend
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the weekend
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general
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in general
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 and where I
do
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apply
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like to spend
time
 with my friends. On weekends I will wake up later than usual.
Firstly
, The feeling of getting enough sleep helps me feel well. After waking up I will play music. Music is on and I will do the housework.
Secondly
, I clean the bedroom and fold my clothes to tidy. I have a couple of flowers on the balcony. I love the feeling of free
time
 standing watering the flowers. Seeing the flowers bloom, I am very excited.
Besides
, In order not to be boring, I will invite a few friends over to my room. We will eat fruit
while
 watching movies and chatting. From
time
 to
time
, we
are
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also spend
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also
 spend
time
 on weekends going out to shop and eat.
Finally
, I love my job very much but I
also
 love myself and always want to give myself some
time
 off so I especially appreciate the weekend. Yours sincerely, Uyen
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task response
Focus on addressing all parts of the prompt in a clear and organized manner.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your ideas flow smoothly and are logically connected throughout the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary by using more diverse and precise words and phrases.
grammatical range
Pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy, including sentence structure and verb agreement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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