The graph below gives information about the percentages of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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the ratio
for
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in
Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia. The chart includes information for the time period between 1970 and 2020 Correct article usage
the Philippines
as well as
prediction
of the trend till the year 2040.
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a prediction
Overall
the percentage
of people living in cities has experienced a huge raise
between 1970 and 2020. The biggest Correct your spelling
rise
growth
comparing
to Change the form of the verb
compared
other
three countries can be Correct article usage
the other
spectated
in Malaysia, which Verb problem
seen
percentage
started at approximately 30 and ended up being bigger than 80. Moreover
, in each of these four countries
there was a constant Add a comma
countries,
growth
during this
period. The only counry
that hasn't experienced constant Correct your spelling
country
growth
was Philippines
. Its Correct article usage
the Philippines
percentage
fell from a bit less than 50 to circa 40 between 1990 and 2010. However
, after
this
the numbers raised back to approximately 45 percent.
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this,
According to
predictions, the upward trend will continue in the next 10 years. However
, in Thailand
the Add a comma
Thailand,
percentage
is expected to grow at a more rapid pace than in other
three countries. Correct article usage
the other
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lower tempo of Correct article usage
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the
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growth
was predicted for Malaysia.Submitted by viacheslav.sydora on
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