You have just spent a week with your friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Emma,
I am writing to tell you how happy I am to have
wonderful
trip with you. Thanks a lot for allowing me to be part of Add an article
a wonderful
this
awesome journey. My holiday would be colourless if I had not gone there. I will send our photos to you via email tomorrow. I wish we could spend another vacation together next time.
Unfortunately, after I had gotten home, I realized my wallet was missing. I think I left it on
your house Change preposition
at
this
afternoon. I was
showed my ID photos to your sister when we had Unnecessary verb
apply
a
lunch. Would you like to find Remove the article
apply
and
send it to my dorm Correct pronoun usage
it and
please
? You can send it by instant courier to White Roses Dorm 3C. I will pay for the Add a comma
, please
courier
costs when he arrives. I am sorry to burden you with Change noun form
courier's
this
. I am looking forward to hearing from you and hopefully
I will see you soon.
Best Regards,
AliyaAdd a comma
hopefully,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or topic to improve the coherence of the letter.
lexical resource
Consider using more appropriate and varied vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource of the letter.
grammatical range
Check for grammatical errors and ensure proper sentence structure for a wider range of grammatical structures.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.