You have just spent a week with your friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Emma, I am writing to tell you how happy I am to have

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trip with you. Thanks a lot for allowing me to be part of

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awesome journey. My holiday would be colourless if I had not gone there. I will send our photos to you via email tomorrow. I wish we could spend another vacation together next time. Unfortunately, after I had gotten home, I realized my wallet was missing. I think I left it

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your house

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showed my ID photos to your sister when we had

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lunch. Would you like to find

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send it to my dorm

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? You can send it by instant courier to White Roses Dorm 3C. I will pay for the

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costs when he arrives. I am sorry to burden you with

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you and

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I will see you soon. Best Regards, Aliya

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

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All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

158 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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