The bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people and also the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries during 1980 and 1990.

The bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people and also the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries during 1980 and 1990.
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The bar charts provide information about the difference between developing and industrialised
countries
in terms of the average year of schooling,
scientists
and
technicians
per 1000 people
as well as
the participation levels in
research
in 1980 and 1990.
Overall
, in both time periods, industrialised areas made the highest contribution in all the sectors and end of the period, changes were significant.
Although
developing
countries
grew over time in schooling,
scientists
and
technicians
, spending on
research
and development became lower. In 1980, people spent almost 9 years in school from industrialised
countries
where it rose to more than 10 schools in 1990.
Furthermore
, Around 42
scientists
and
technicians
were found on 1000 which increased by more than 20 people in 1990. Spending on
research
and development was increased over the 10-year period.
On the other hand
, only around 3 teaching environment was available in developing
countries
which changed to more than 3 in the 10-year period.
Scientists
and
technicians
were very small amount ( between 15 to 20 humans per 1000).
However
, these regions declined their
ependiture
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expenditure
expenditures
on
research
and development areas.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, scientists, technicians, research with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar charts
  • average
  • schooling
  • scientists
  • technicians
  • participation
  • research and development
  • developing countries
  • industrialized countries
  • 1980
  • 1990
  • comparison
  • trends
  • differences
  • education
  • research levels
  • potential reasons
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